I made this video for a company, it's part of a contest they did and I'm one of the finalists. The winner get's their video to be played on their website, maybe even played as an add or something on another page. It's not completely edited yet, but you get the gist of it...let me know what you think and how I can improve upon it.
One of the important things is, does it make you want to check out the site or is it just cool to watch? And if it's just cool to watch, what little things can I edit to make people want to click. That will be a criteria that they measure.
And I already know the girl isn't HOT HOT HOT. Sorry, best I could do. Hahaha.